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Musings On a Lonely Night

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I sit alone in my room,
just as I've sat so many nights before.

Hoping, waiting, longing,
for you to walk though my door.

You don't even appear
in my dreams anymore.

Before I met you,
I was alone and ignored.

How many different ways are there to tell you,
"You're the one I adore"?

I'd give up the world
just to be with you once more.
I wish these rhymes
could be as creative as yours.

As for expressing my feelings,
this is what I must settle for.

A random musing in the middle of an insomnia filled night turned into this. <insert self-critisism here> (Though this is my first rhyming poetry.)

For ~Michael2002. He's way better at this than I am.
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deadlyASPIRATIONX8's avatar
Simply extraordinary.
Beautiful choice of words.
I would say I'm speechless but I'm still talking..

*rushes to fave*